Common App Essay Help!

<p>Could someone please critique my common app statement? The EA deadline is getting close and I'm freaking out! Your help is greatly appreciated :D</p>

<p>Hey, I’ll read yours if you read mine. Just PM me it and I’ll send you mine. For reference, I’m applying to wash u in stl louis, notre dame, stanford, yale, pepperdine, and usc. I’m doing Notre Dame EA btw.</p>

<p>Sure, PM me the essay and i’ll try my best to critique it for u :)</p>

<p>I can critique it for you if you still need more eyes!</p>

<p>Awesome! The more editors the better :D</p>

<p>Also, sorry I posted in the wrong thread. I forgot there was a college essays one :P</p>

<p>I can help out! It’d be great if you could also read mine.
<a href=“http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/1405909-international-students-essay.html[/url]”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/1405909-international-students-essay.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

<p>I’ll help! PM me!</p>