Common App Essay Help?

<p>Would anyone on here be willing to read my essay for the common app. I'm not to sure how good it is, so any help would be awesome. Thank you!</p>

<p>I’ll take a crack at it, do you want line-by-line notes or just broader developmental stuff?</p>

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

<p>Sure</p>

<p>feel free to PM me</p>

<p>Sure, feel free to PM me, i’d be happy to help out :slight_smile: </p>