Can anyone help me by reading the first two paragraphs of my common app essay and give me feedback? I really need my essay to stand out. If anyone who is applying this year as well, I can do a read for a read.
Why not write a whole essay before you ask for help? It’s hard to get a feel for an essay when you’re only reading the first 2 paragraphs.
Anyone who reads it will know it’s only a draft. But give us the whole thing to go on.
All right, I’ll try my best to finish my essay today.