Common app essay...HELP

<p>Can anyone please look through my essay? I'm trying to apply early to Colgate and I need a feedback in 2-3 days. Anyone care to help?</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>Sure. I can take a look. I'm not applying there anyways. Maybe you can look at mine after im done with them.</p>

<p>Wrong forum, go to the College Essays forum.</p>

<p>Email it to me <a href="mailto:ironmetal250@gmail.com">ironmetal250@gmail.com</a>
Already submitted all my apps so don't worry about me stealing it.</p>

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<p>u can send it to me.. ill read!!
my essay is already ready so dont worry</p>

<p>double bump</p>

<p>please leave your e-mail address if you want me to send it to you. I promise it's not a boring essay:D</p>