Common App Essay... I actually like it!

College Essays
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<p>Hello,</p>

<p>I wrote a common application essay. It is about my camp experience, yet it is not cliqued and it has an unique twist I think, because it is completely and 100 percent me.</p>

<p>I would really appreciate someone hopefully in college, please, to look over my essay and let me know what you think. Feel free to rip into it, and tear it apart. Being entirely critical is perfect.</p>

<p>If you are interested, please either PM me or email <a href="mailto:CTarantine@aol.com">CTarantine@aol.com</a>. I will email you the copy of it.</p>

<p>Thanks.
Twirlon</p>

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<p>i can do a really in-depth edit of your essay if you want. pm me :)</p>

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<p>I could rip it apart for you (if it's to be ripped apart, of course. PM if you like. =)</p>

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<p>ill take a look at it and critique it.</p>