Common app essay in need of proofreading

<p>I would appreciate it if someone could proofread my common app essay (applying Brown ED). Let me know if you want to and I'll happily PM it to you!</p>

<p>I’ll read if you PM me :)</p>

<p>PM Me and I’ll proofread it :)!</p>

<p>Thank you! Anyone else willing to give feedback?</p>

<p>You can send it to me, will happily give feedback. Not applying to Brown so your safe.</p>

<p>PM it to me id love to help out!
my friend goes to brown and i still have his supplement essay so i can definitely help you out!</p>