<p>Hey guys, I was wondering if I could get insight on one of my essays. I'm having such a hard time writing it, and I'd really appreciate any comments or suggestions to make it better. To be honest, I haven't really done that many exciting activities. But one extracurricular that I've joined which I love is our school's Gay Straight Alliance. Anyways I've written my essay about that, and I'd just really appreciate anyone's output And my prompt is "Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below (1000 character maximum). "Thank you guys so much♥</p>