COMMON APP ESSAY need help

<p>HEY, can anyone look my essay over and help me think of ways to maybe SPRUCE it up to make it good.</p>

<p>i'll help PM it</p>

<p>Sure I'll look it over =)</p>

<p>I'm looking for some help too if anyone would be willing to edit</p>

<p>i certainly will.</p>

<p>i could help.</p>