<p>Please help! For the main common app essay. I tried to do something a bit different, but I wonder if this is too much and if I should go in another direction. It would be greatly appreciated if anyone would want to read it :)</p>
<p>May I take a look at it?</p>
<p>I’d be happy to critique.</p>
<p>I can give you some feedback. PM it over.</p>
<p>i’ll critique</p>
<p>sure! i’m working on my essay now too, i’m excited to see what other people are coming up with :)</p>
<p>I’ll read it too.
Btw, why is this website so slow?</p>
<p>I can read it ifff you want me to heeehee</p>
<p>Send it over!</p>