Common App Essay - Prompt 4 - Take a look :D

<p>If anybody wants to take a look at my essay and critique it / proofread.... let me know!</p>

<p>Thanks in advance :)</p>

<p>I’d be happy to proofread/critique it. </p>

<p>bump :)</p>

<p>Would anyone else like to read it?</p>

<p>Sure I would like to read it.</p>

<p>I’ll help! Someone help me with mine too please </p>