Common App Essay Question #1: "Pick Me!", is anyone willing to read?

<p>I just finished my essay for the Common App Essay #1, would anyone care to read mine and critique it? It's a draft so I'm trying to get it ready for the upcoming year. Thank you!</p>

<p>ill read it. pm it to me.</p>

<p>i’ll read it!!!
Then PM me :)</p>

<p>i’ll read it!!!
Then PM me :)</p>

<p>yea sure i’ll look it over, PM me</p>

<p>I 'll read it</p>

<p>i’ll read it. pm me. i will definietly give you feedback.</p>

<p>Sure, PM it over! :)</p>

<p>Sure, just pm me.</p>

<p>No problem - PM me! (btw, I’ve gotten 5s in AP lit and AP lang)</p>

<p>if you still need help, PM me</p>

<p>just pm it over!</p>

<p>I’ll read it! Pm me :)</p>