<p>For the Common App prompt which asks us to discuss why we are transferring, many advise to write an essay which offers specific reasons. The bulk of my essay talks about what type of person I am (risk taker, decision maker, overachiever) and the last paragraph talks about essentially challenging myself more w/ more diversity, challenging classes, etc.,</p>
<p>I'm afraid my essay is not specific enough. My current uni is not challenging, that is for sure, but is my last paragraph too forthright with me saying "I want to go to a better university in a place with diversity and accessibility to professors"</p>
<p>Thanks</p>