<p>please help me out. ask me to PM it to you, and i will.
I just need some realistic input in a complete perspective of an admissions officer.</p>
<p>Well, I’m not an admissions officer, but I can give you my honest first assessment of it if you’d like. PM it over and I’ll read it.</p>
<p>i’ll read it… pm me or email me at <a href="mailto:angelmonicaw@yahoo.com">angelmonicaw@yahoo.com</a></p>
<p>PM me, not admissions officer but pretty good with essays and already got into MIT Early Action.</p>
<p>i’ll take a look at it, PM me.</p>
<p>e mail it to me at <a href="mailto:kushalpurie@gmail.com">kushalpurie@gmail.com</a></p>
<p>you can send it to me if you wish</p>
<p>i can take a look at it if you still need readers</p>
<p>Try to find some people in the college forums to read it, so you can get the perspective of someone, who has done this before.</p>