<p>Can anybody read my essay and give me some feedbacks? Just experienced people with more than 500 posts please.</p>
<p>Regards,</p>
<p>I’d love to help you out. If you choose not, I hope you do well with every school you apply c:</p>
<p>Thank you!
Any other people?</p>
<p>I would help you out as well. := D</p>
<p>i would like to read it for you.</p>