Common App Essay (Rough Draft)

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>Would anyone like to help me revise my common app essay? :) I'd appreciate any insights or help you have to offer. I wouldn't mind looking over yours as well. </p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>Sure tatianamoloko1996******.com</p>

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<p>At yahoo (weird how it did that)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. alexmassachi@**********</p>

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<p>At gmail (idk what happened up there)</p>

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<p>@alexmass</p>

<p>It doesn’t let you post email addresses, not exactly sure why. Thanks, I’ll send it to you now.</p>

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<p>Sure pm me.</p>

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<p>Send it via PM to me too!</p>

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<p>I’m not sure if either of you have received it yet, my messages aren’t sending properly. If you don’t mind giving me your email in a PM, I can send it to you. :)</p>

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<p>Can you PM it to me as well?</p>

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<p>adamashraf97 @ hotmail .com (without the spaces obviously)</p>

<p>I’d love it if u can check mine too :D</p>

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<p>PM me too.</p>

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<p>Sure I can</p>

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<p>just PM me :)</p>

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<p>Pm me if you still need help!</p>

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<p>Sure, I’d love to look it over!
You can personal message me it!</p>

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<p>I’d love to do it. :)</p>