Common App Essay Rough Draft

<p>Anyone willing to take a look at my essay and give me any pointers/corrections/constructive criticism. This is my first whack at it and I would appreciate any instruction.</p>

<p>Sure! I would be happy too!</p>

<p>Yeah sure :)</p>

<p>Would be glad to.</p>

<p>I would be happy to.</p>

<p>Yup just PM me</p>

<p>I volunteer :slight_smile:
Pm me.</p>