common app essay would anyone care to help?

<p>so.. I'm applying to NYU and I just finished my common app long essay.</p>

<p>I don't really know if its good or not.. soo..yea</p>

<p>Would anyone like to help me with it?</p>

<p>No 09'ers though =]</p>

<p>ill read it for ya</p>

<p>PM me if you like. i ll see what i can do to help</p>

<p>im an 09er but ill read it if you want</p>