Common App Essay?

<p>Hi everyone. I recently wrote the first draft of my common app essay in response to the second prompt ("Discuss some issue of personal, local, national, or international concern and its importance to you"). Would anyone be willing to read it and give me suggestions? Thanks for your help.</p>

<p>Sure, you can PM it to me. I’ll read it and comment as soon as I can!</p>

<p>I would be more than happy to read it =)</p>

<p>PM me! I’d love to read it (:</p>

<p>hey i’ll try to critique it!</p>

<p>Sure. PM me</p>