Common App Essay!

<p>Okay so I have two Versions of pretty much the same essay.. I honestly don't know what to do. I like both. I don't like both. If anybody would be willing to read one or both I would be eternally grateful. I would read back if somebody wanted to do that sort of thing. I just really don't know what to do. </p>

<p>PLEASE </p>

<p>Caroline</p>

<p>pm it over :-)</p>

<p>Send it over Caroline.</p>

<p>you can send it to me!</p>