<p>Hi guys,</p>
<p>I'm an international student and English is my second language. So writing essay is not my strong point.
I would be glad if someone could proof-read my common app essay.
It's about my time as a Buddhist monk in India.
I would truly appreciate it if someone could help me.</p>
<p>The question I chose is:Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence. </p>
<p>I will pm or email to those who would like to help me out.
Thanks in advance for all your future help.</p>