Common App Essay?

Is anyone willing to read my first draft of my common app essay? I really would like some other opinions. It’s on the last prompt about an event that transitioned you from childhood to adulthood and I’m kind of thinking its bad…
Thank you!!

I can, but I’ve got to warn you, it will take me a few days to get to it.

@eandreano1 I’ll read it, PM me!

I can.

I would recomemnd you NOT to send your essays to other high school students.

PM me

I think that it’s a hard prompt choice to get right, but if you do it will be good, If you wanna do a trade and review mine too that would be great! I love feedback. PM me

I’ll give it a look . PM :slight_smile: