Common app essay

hey guys im international student applying ED this november, i was wondering if someone can read my common essay cuz i’m not sure if its good enough .
Thank you in advance

I’d be willing to read it. I’ve already gone through the college app process, so I’d love to help others. Send me a private message.

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