<p>Hello!</p>
<p>I'm writing a common app essay for EA and was wondering if anyone was willing to proofread/critique/anything it.
It's very rough so I am open to suggestions.</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>Ill read proofread it for you, PM me.</p>
<p>I;ll read and try to give you my opinion on it.</p>
<p>I'll give you some perspective on it. PM me.</p>
<p>If I may, and get back to you soon. pm it ove.</p>