<p>Hey..
I need advice on my common app essay. The end of it seems a bit cliche, so I need some tips.
No 09ers please.</p>
<p>Thanks.</p>
<p>I'd be happy to read it... if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account... but i would prefer a pm</p>
<p><a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>