<p>Hi everyone,
If anyone could please read my essay and short response, whether to edit it or just give a general opinion on it, I would appreciate it SOOOO MUCH! I think I'm an okay writer, but I'm not sure if I'm hitting all the necessary points. </p>
<p>Hey, I will read them if you like. I am also applying this year, but I did early decision! You can send it to me through e-mail or PM. My email is <a href="mailto:finals1234@gmail.com">finals1234@gmail.com</a></p>