Common app essay

<p>Hi everyone,
If anyone could please read my essay and short response, whether to edit it or just give a general opinion on it, I would appreciate it SOOOO MUCH! I think I'm an okay writer, but I'm not sure if I'm hitting all the necessary points. </p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>glad to help.
i’m also applying this year though.</p>

<p>thank you! thats fine; how would you like me to send them to you?</p>

<p>Hey, I will read them if you like. I am also applying this year, but I did early decision! You can send it to me through e-mail or PM. My email is <a href="mailto:finals1234@gmail.com">finals1234@gmail.com</a></p>