<p>Hey! I am applying to penn e.d this fall and i just finished the rough draft of my comon app essay. I would appreciate it if anyone would read it and give me their critique and advice. Thanks! =)</p>
<p>I’ll critique, just pm me</p>
<p>Which school are you applying to in Penn? That might make all the difference! Or, to be more specific, which program? </p>
<p>I believe you should try to make your essay reflect your major! Or that’s what my vision was when I submitted my essay. </p>
<p>I’ll be glad to critique your essay and provide some feedback.</p>
<p>xs0itg0esx: I’ve critiqued nearly all my friends’ essay at school now =D, so I’m pretty decent at it by now. PM it to me, and I’ll provide suggestions and how it feels overall.</p>
<p>PM with title/prompt</p>
<p>Sure, PM me and I’ll give feedback!</p>
<p>PM it to me…I’m readyto critique it.</p>
<p>PM it to me, I’ll read it fo sho !!!</p>
<p>Would love to help. PM me.</p>
<p>PM me, I will see what I can do for you.</p>