Common App Essay

<p>I am looking for a few people able and willing to comment on my response to the Common App essay prompt, "[e]valuate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you." Also, I was wondering whether a 427 word essay for this prompt is long enough, or if I should add another paragraph to bring the word count to around 500.</p>

<p>PM me and I will give you feedback</p>