Common App Essay

<p>I could use some readers for my main common app essay. I just wrote a draft today and haven't given it any polish, but I'd like to get some feedback on what I have so far. I am only posting this in the Harvard forum because out of all of the schools that I visited, Harvard feels like the best fit for me and I really would like to attend.</p>

<p>You can PM me. We can share our essays to give each other some feedback</p>

<p>No offense, but I don’t feel comfortable sharing my essays with any other 2015ers. Nothing personal, but I wouldn’t feel secure doing that! Hope you understand.</p>

<p>Your username made me laugh. Nice to see another Scorsese fan on here. Alas, I am also a 2015er, but good luck with your essay.</p>

<p>I’m a 2016er so I will read if you would like me to :)</p>

<p>You can pm your essay to me.
I’ve been on admission committees.</p>