Common App help!!

[gotwinskc44]

<p>Hey guys, I'm in need of some help on my common app essay. Any and all feedback is much appreciated. If you comment I'm happy to PM my essay to you. </p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

[Fairmaple]

<p>Sure,PM me over.</p>

[aribman]

<p>Yeah, PM me</p>