<p>Can anyone give me some feedback on my common app essay? I'm applying to all the ivies on the common app so I wanna make this essay awesome or scrap it if it's beyond help. I need real feedback so don't feel the need to pull punches ^_^</p>
<p>PM it to me, I'll take a look. Anything specific you want help with?</p>
<p>I could help.</p>
<p>i'd love to help</p>
<p>I'll read it.</p>
<p>il take a look at it</p>
<p>I d like to read it</p>