<p>Hi, I just finished writing the common app personal essay. I would like to know if anyone will read it and give me some feedback. Tell me if you think it could work or if it would not be good to use for my essay and tell me what needs to be changed. I had already written an essay where I talked about school and grades but then I decided today that I didnt like it and I wrote a whole new essay with a different approach. I wrote about how figure skating has helped me, which I thought would work better because its more personal and can't really be mentioned anywhere else. I also am unsure of what to title it and if it should go under pick your own topic or the evaluate a significant achievement one. Im not sure if my essay completely fits under the evaluate a significant achievement one, because I don't just focus the essay I on one concrete achievement.</p>
<p>I’ll read it if you read mine 
And there’s always the pick your own topic one, that way you can’t go wrong.</p>