<p>Hi Everyone,</p>
<p>Can you guys critique my Common App Personal Statement?</p>
<p>The prompt is "Influential Person/Influence on You"</p>
<p>Please help me out :)
I'll in return, critique your essay as well.</p>
<p>Thanks,
SwedishM8</p>
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<p>yes! PM it</p>