<p>I am doing the common app on paper for one university and I was thinking if it would be ok to put "AIDS center...etc." as one of my extracurriculars (it was a youth center in my community)? </p>
<p>After, it ask me to elaborate one on of my extracurriculars and I was deciding to elaborate on that.</p>
<p>"As a Peer Educator, I had to advance in my knowledge of AIDS by taking more training courses to better myself for the community. I learned in depth the affects of AIDS, the ways to cure or handle the syndrome, and the ways to approach and inform others with my knowledge from the training. To inform the community about these affects, I would go out to the public and speak to individuals. By doing so, I opened out of my shell; I became unbashful to speak informally to ones I didn't know. By being a Peer Educator, I have learned to speak out to the public in a effective matter and I am now more prepared to speak to others."</p>
<p>Is that a good paragraph of elaboration?</p>