<p>can anyone read/critique it and help shorten it? its 218 words right now. preferably people in class of 2008. thanks</p>
<p>Sure. Class of '08. =]</p>
<p>Class of '09. I have my short one done, and it’s on figure skating- so I promise I won’t steal yours. :)</p>
<p>I’ll read it!</p>
<p>sure (10char)</p>
<p>i’ll read it, pm me.</p>
<p>I’m class of '09, but I’m done with my short (well… it needs to get a few words shorter, but <em>mostly</em> done) so if you’d like my help I’d love to do what I can.</p>
<p>pm me. (10 char)</p>
<p>I’d like to read, and I promise I won’t steal it because I basically got mine done.</p>
<p>you can pm me</p>
<p>PM me if you want to. I’ve read alot of essays by now.</p>
<p>PM me! '08 as well</p>