<p>I wrote about Church mission trip to mexico but.....</p>
<p>Should i straight out just talk about what i did in mexico and how i helped?
or give a little background in the beginning about the organization?</p>
<p>here's what i have so far please help.... Thanks</p>
<p>"Our church goes to Mexico every summer for a mission trip. The mission is directed by 4ChristMission and teams come from all over the country. In Mexico, our group plays and takes care of children whose parents are working and cannot provide care. Also, the mission group has built a school, so that children may come and receive education while their parents are out. I personally served as a co-director and translator for my church group. I was responsible for a group of 6 to 9 year old children and taught these children English and Mathematics. These children, when I first encountered them, were hopeless and had nowhere to go. However, the mission trip enabled us to give the children hope and sense of pride in their lives. I was able to see how the smallest act of good can affect the children and change their lives forever."</p>
<p>I feel like i should elaborate more and write how What i learned but if i say i learned the importance of thankfulness (or something like that) it sounds too cliche.....</p>
<p>Any tips?</p>