<p>would anyone mind critiquing the first draft of my short answer for the common app? if so, post here and i will PM it to you. thanks so much.</p>
<p>Post this in the Essay forum; you'll have better luck.</p>
<p>would anyone mind critiquing the first draft of my short answer for the common app? if so, post here and i will PM it to you. thanks so much.</p>
<p>Post this in the Essay forum; you'll have better luck.</p>