Common App short essay, take a look.

College Essays
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<p>If anyone wants to read it, I'll PM it to you. I think it needs help with the intro and the transitions.</p>

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<p>I'll give it a shot. PM me.</p>

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<p>I'll read it. PM me</p>

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<p>me too, if you still need people.</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>If you still need more opinions just PM me.</p>

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<p>pm me for feedback</p>

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<p>Radyland, one ought not to private message another for the sake of essay editing? Am I right? Am I right? Isn't it?</p>

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<p>pm me, i can give some advises.</p>

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<p>I already turned mine in. I'll read it.</p>

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<p>I'll read, PM me :)</p>

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<p>ill take a look
pm me</p>

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<p>I'll take a look.</p>

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<p>I certainly will.</p>

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<p>i'll take a look PM me!</p>