Common App/Supplement Essay!

Colleges and Universities A-Z Harvard University
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<p>Would anyone like to read both my common app essay and harvard supplement essay? I already submitted mine so. I suppose there's no point of asking people how to improve my essays but I'd just like here some feedbacks from you guys. You know the whole "my passion in blah blah blah tought me some lessons." I don't think mine was any BS-like or condescending in a way that says "Because I put tons of efforts into this activity, this is why you should accept me - for sake of diversity" or anything.
I tried to make it honesty and mostly a piece of writing that conveyes "me" -(as all of you probably heard it million times already)</p>

<p>anyway, if anyone is willing to, let me know
thx</p>

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<p>i'll read it.</p>

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<p>id like to read it too. pm me if you could.</p>

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<p>I'll give you some quick feedback</p>

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<p>I've just sent in my harvard app :P
I'll also read your essays. pm me?</p>

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<p>will read it</p>

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<p>i'll read it too.</p>