Common App transition essay

<p>I'm writing my common app essay on the transition to adulthood prompt and I wasn't sure if my approach was addressing the prompt enough. If anyone would be willing to look over it, I would really appreciated it.</p>

<p>I’d be happy to read it! :slight_smile: I have extensive experience with editing essays, both on CC.com and as a coach at my school’s writing center, so hopefully I can be of some help to you :stuck_out_tongue: Just PM me and I’ll give you my email address.</p>

<p>I would gladly read it for you and give my feedback! :)</p>

<p>Awesome! Would anyone else be willing to read it over?</p>

<p>I would read it.</p>

<p>I would read it over. (:</p>

<p>i would like to read it for you.</p>