<p>I need some readers for my common app essay that I've redone over and over again. It's pretty refined now, but I want to make sure that everything makes sense from a third party view and just if there are any other tips you guys have :) Thanks for the help, post and I'll pm.</p>
<p>you can send it to me…</p>
<p>And me. I’m pretty critical, but I will read. PM</p>