<p>If anyone would like to read my essay, please PM me. I would like some feedback on it before submitting it to colleges!</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>Send it over. </p>
<p>Forgot to add that the prompt is
“Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.”</p>
<p>If anyone else wants to read it, please pm me or comment here</p>
<p>I can help read it</p>
<p>Thanks! More feedback and advice is always good!</p>
<p>Willing to help if you still need it</p>
<p>Hi Can have a look and comment if you still need </p>
<p>I can read it!</p>
<p>Just PMed everyone who asked! As always, still looking for more feedback/comments to make a great essay 
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