Common application essay. I need immediate help lol

College Essays
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<p>Would anyone please read it and edit it and comment on it lol???</p>

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<p>send it! =)</p>

<p>merry christmas btw</p>

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<p>yeah sure, send it over.
either pm or <a href="mailto:dj.jliu@gmail.com">dj.jliu@gmail.com</a></p>