Common Application essay - Is it cliched?

<p>Hi all,</p>

<p>While this is my first post, I have been lurking CC for years now. What has finally brought me to create an account on this, the eve of RD deadlines? I read over my personal statement earlier today and realized that it's CLICHE! If anyone can read over it and advise me on how to rescue my application I'd be eternally grateful. The prompt is the one about where you feel perfectly content at, and I chose... running. </p>

<p>I can read it!</p>

<p>ill take a look </p>