Common Application Essay (Need Feedback Please)

Colleges and Universities A-Z Stanford University
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<p>I just finished my ROUGH draft of my common application essay for Stanford. I need some feedback as to what you think about the essay and what kind of picture you get of me after reading it.</p>

<p>Some criterias though:</p>

<p>** No Fellow Stanford Applicants, Please! **</p>

<p>** Perferably people of "Member" status or above, though current college students and parents are welcome. **</p>

<p>Thanks guys!</p>

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<p>I'll read it, if you like.</p>

<p>I'm not applying to any Ivy's -- my grades and EC's aren't good enough lol</p>

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<p>I'd love to read it. I'm applying stanford as well and I also finished my essay</p>

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<p>^Sorry mikeunlacher. Please read the words in Bold.</p>

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<p>Thanks static75! Anyone else?</p>

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<p>Sure why not.
Oh wait.</p>

<p>Stanford forum around this time of the year is probably filled with other applicants..</p>

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<p>Could any current students please help? I'd really appreciate it! I promise it's not boring! :)</p>

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<p>Hey, I'm not applying to Stanford and I'll be happy to take a look and offer some feedback. Send it over :)</p>