Common Application Essay

<p>Would anyone like to read my Common App Essay? I would appreciate any criticism or advice from other readers. PM me and i'll send you it. Thanks.</p>

<p>pm me...............</p>

<p>i'll read it
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<p>pm me if u still need help</p>

<p>i'd love to help, pm me</p>

<p>i'll check it out</p>