Common Application Personal Statement

College Essays
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<p>Would anyone be willing to read my personal statement and provide feedback? I've been having trouble finding an original idea that still describes me, but I think I've found it. </p>

<p>Thanks</p>

2

<p>i'll take a look at it!</p>

3

<p>Sure, send it over</p>

4

<p>thanks for the help. </p>

<p>more is appreciated!</p>

5

<p>I think I mistook your essay for a UC one!! Sorry!</p>

6

<p>i'd be willing to read :D</p>

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<p>now that you know it is not a UC essay, do you offer the same advice?</p>

8

<p>bump............</p>

9

<p>Yes, I still would. I mistook your essay for someone else's who wrote it on biology (your name XD). I still think it's pretty solid. The comments i made stand.</p>