Common Application Transfer Essay: Can someone review mine? PLEASE

Transfer Students
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<p>anyone interested in proof reading my college application essay?</p>

<p>PM me if you are interested, I need some help/suggestions</p>

<p>The topic is: "Provide a statement (250 words minimum) that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve"</p>

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<p>I’m a senior in HS atm but you can go ahead & pm it to me if you want my opinion or want it proofread :)</p>

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<p>sure pm me</p>

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<p>I just sent mine out, so I can proofread it as well if you’d like.</p>