CommonApp Essay readers out there? (Interesting take on a meh topic)

Hey all! I’m a senior applying to several schools this year. I’m hoping to get advice from y’all! The essay’s about stereotypes, but I think my approach is pretty unique.

I’d prefer to not have readers who are also applying this year, however.

Thank you very much!

yeah i’ll read.

I can give feedback, PM me when you can.

I’ll read it for you

I’ll take a look