<p>My school counselors have told me that my essay is good, but they tend to be soft on criticism. If anyone would be willing to (critically) look at my essay and give me some suggestions, it would be appreciated.</p>
<p>i’ll be willing to read your essay</p>
<p>sure 
I’d love to help!</p>
<p>bump…</p>
<p>sure. pm me.</p>
<p>I’ll read it! PM me.</p>