CommonApp Essay

College Essays
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<p>hey would anyone like to read my essay... i have corrected it a few times. its now back at 702 i use to have it to 590 but i think i added back a few ideas which were important to touch on.</p>

<p>if anyone is up to it please let me know. most people i asked say its a very unique topic which i have chosen - just in case that makes up someones mind to read it and offer a few corrections.</p>

<p>the main thing im really looking for if you will be able to read it is 1. remove excess details which are not important. i dont care about going over the word limit especiall cause its not the much higher compared to most but if theres stuff in there which is not needed i dont want to waste their time.
2. does the essay say enough about me.. thats the main point i want to make sure ive covered</p>

<p>just let me know thanks you guys! leave your email !</p>

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<p>if you still need editing, i'd be more than happy to.</p>

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<p>yeah could you give me your email so i can send it to you</p>

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<p>If you'd like another reviewer I'd be glad to look at it
<a href="mailto:smiskura@aol.com">smiskura@aol.com</a></p>

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<p>i'll take a look at it.</p>

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<p>i'd love to help, pm me</p>

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<p>i'd be happy to take a look at it.
<a href="mailto:audicab1@gmail.com">audicab1@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>I'd like to help too
pm me if you want to</p>